Entertainment Value

Friday, February 1, 2008 Posted by SFWriter13 0 comments
"The novel may stimulate you to think. It may satisfy your esthetic sense. It may arouse your moral emotions. But if it does not entertain you it is a bad novel."

W. Somerset Maugham
When I am stuck for something to ramble on about here, I crack open The Quotable Writer to a random page and use whichever of the quotations on the two facing pages strikes a chord. Today is such an event. The quotation above resonated strongly with me, as it echoes a thought that I have often found myself struggling with.

Over the years, I have attended in several Creative Writing classes, attended workshops, and been part of writing groups. The first seem to generally focus on technique, structure, and style. These are all good and useful things to know. However, when taught in an academic environment, they tend to get overly concerned with literary elements and less on getting a story told.

When I sit down to write, first and foremost, I strive to present an entertaining story. I want my readers to feel that their time and money are both well-spent. I think it's only a small percentage of readers who will remember the literary style or attention to the properly extended metaphor. My goals is to have the maj0rity of readers finish the story feeling that they've been on an enjoyable voyage getting from the first page to the last (and hopefully wanting more).

This is not to say that I don't hope to present intriguing ideas or pose questions of ethics, morality, or spirituality. It is the characters' journeys as they explore these issues—whether internally or externally—that I find make a story particularly compelling and memorable. This isn't to say, of course, that a good dollop of action isn't nice too.

There are too, I know, who scoff at any media produced solely with the intent to "entertain". I can recall very few of these that did not also try to accomplish at least one of the other three goals that Maugham mentions. The issue really is which of these was a priority for the author. For most readers, it's really about entertainment value. Value, as measured in dollars and hours. Writing and publishing are, in the end, businesses. The ideal situation is to reach as wide an audience as possible with one's work.

Solid entertainment will nearly always sell better than superb craftsmanship—although sloppy work will always get you notice (and probably not the kind you want). Unlike other merchandise, people don't tend to return books to the seller as "defective" because the quality writing was below their expectations. (There might be people who do this, but I don't know anyone who has ever done it.) The long-term result, though, is that those readers will most likely not look for that author's name again the next time they're looking for something to read. They will, however, remember those who showed them a good time—gave them value for their time and money.

Isn't that what we all want?
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The Year in Review, The Year Ahead

Tuesday, January 8, 2008 Posted by SFWriter13 0 comments
Well, let's see how I did this year . . .

2007 Accomplishments

Here are my 2007 writing-related goals and how well I did during the year:
  1. Finish the first draft of "Battlefield".
    Completed on 12/10/07.
  2. Finish a new draft of "Building Baby Brother" and submit it.
    Sadly, no. I did start giving it some thought, but no real writing work was done.
  3. Participate in NaNoWriMo 2007.
    Yes. And I'm very pleased with my performance this year. You can read the posts specific to this if you're interested.
  4. Participate in Script Frenzy.
    Participated: Yes. Won: No. I get partial credit for trying?
  5. A page a day. If nothing else: a page a day.
    Yes. Even not counting NaNoWriMo, I am pleased that to report that I managed to accomplish this.

2008 Goals

These are my writing-related goals for the year:

  1. Finish a new draft of "Building Baby Brother" and submit it.
  2. Begin work on the second draft of Battlefield.
  3. Participate in NaNoWriMo 2008.
  4. Participate in Script Frenzy 2008.
  5. A page a day. If nothing else: a page a day.
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The NaNoWriMo 2007 Report: The 56,000-Word View

Saturday, December 1, 2007 Posted by SFWriter13 0 comments
NaNoWriMo 2007 WinnerYes, it's done. The story itself is not yet finished--far from it, in fact. But November has come to close and, with it, NaNoWriMo 2007.

This year was in many ways a similar experience to last year, and in some ways quite different. In looking back at last year's reports, I see the same complaints of difficulties with the muse during approximately the same periods. This year, though, I knew better than to believe that I could start slow and catch up later. With a specific daily goal, and a strong goad of discipline, this year was a much more satisfying experience. I spent less time worrying over how much I'd fallen behind my needed word count (which I never did this year) and more about the progression of the story.

[For those of you interested in the statistics: To reach the 50,000-word mark requires an average of 1,667 words/day. I set a personal goal of 1,700 words/day to give myself a very small buffer. Had I maintained that, I would have reached 50,000 words on the 29th--only one day early. My average was slightly more than 1,800 words/day. What a difference an extra 100 words make!)

I believe this year's story is much more structured than last year's effort. Although I had to do some literary tap-dancing a bit here and there, it generally adheres to the overall structure I set out for it. I do recognize that there are gaps that I need to fill in order to complete the overall story, but I think that as it is, it works (or will work, when completed) as a sufficiently self-contained story.

It's nice to know that I can learn from my mistakes. :)

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The NaNoWriMo 2007 Report: Week 4

Thursday, November 29, 2007 Posted by SFWriter13 1 comments
Done. But not finished.

I reached the 50,000-word mark around 10:30 pm on Monday. Compared to last year's mad sprint to the finish line, it felt incredibly anti-climatic. Maybe because it wasn't even close to the 30th? I don't know. Yes, I still felt a faint glow of pride that I had hit the mark. 50,000 words in less than 30 days is an even more admirable feat, I suppose?

The writing process itself was better this week than during Weeks 2 and 3. I had several long bursts of creativity, even hitting a word count that exceeded 2,700 words on one day. (I just checked: that was Thanksgiving Day. I guess I had much to be thankful for that day! :) )

I have continued on and will record my final word count at some point Friday night. The story is not yet over and I'm not ready for it to end.
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The NaNoWriMo 2007 Report: Week 3

Wednesday, November 21, 2007 Posted by SFWriter13 1 comments
This week has been only slightly less painful than Week 2. I've gotten a much better feel for the characters who I felt were not that well developed before, and most of them have taken some interesting turns in terms of their insights and actions. The story itself has started picking up in its pacing, but at this moment I don't know who did it or why. (I remember now why I don't write straight mysteries . . .)

Despite the muse's reluctance, I have managed to average more than my personal goal each day, so I should be in really good shape for the home stretch next week. (I also looked at my progress last year and I had reached this week's word count on the 28th, so things are progressing much, much better this year.)

I can see now that this will turn into a much longer novel than last year's effort (in the end). At the 40,000-word mark, things are only now starting to get interesting--and one of the sub-plots has barely been explored. It feels better structured than last year's effort, but I'm also finding that I'm getting bogged down with the same sort of issues as last year in terms of keepinig the plot advancing. I think it's a side effect of having to write, write, write without being able to take the time to really plot things out, so I resort to more inner examination of the characters. (It's also, as I told a friend, a way of making notes to myself of things to remember or explore later in a future draft or story.)

Okay, okay, I will admit that it is much nicer this year to not be 8,000 words behind my goal, and it's very nice to be 5,000 words ahead of where I should be.

We'll see what next week brings . . .
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The NaNoWriMo 2007 Report: Week 2

Thursday, November 15, 2007 Posted by SFWriter13 0 comments
Groan.

I've (somehow) managed to keep up the pace this week, staying well ahead of my personal goals and where I realistically needed to be in order to complete 50,000 words by November 30.

It was a tough week. The muse seemed determined to sit there with her arms wrapped tightly around each sentence, unwilling to surrender them to me. Each one that she gave me, she did so grudgingly. I'm sure the writing reflects it, but the goal is words, words, words--quantity over quality. (Yeah, sure, just try to tell a Virgo that!)

There's been a few interesting twists and turns this week, both in terms of plot and character. More than once, I've thought back and wondered, "Why did she decide to have that happen?"

Over the past two days I've also hit upon an interesting insight: even "evil" characters have hopes, fears, and dreams, just like the good guys do. The difference, sometimes, is only the context in which they occur.

Okay. Back at it for Week Three . . .
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The NaNoWriMo 2007 Report: Week 1

Thursday, November 8, 2007 Posted by SFWriter13 0 comments
It has been a good week!

I set myself a goal of a minimum of 1,700 words a day as a hedge against those days when the muse balks and decides to give me the silent treatment. So far (and I choose that phrase with great care), I have managed an average of more than 1,800 words each day.

I ended up doing the project this year that I really wanted to do, but needed the insistence of a friend and the toss of a three-sided die to settle on. It's a bit of an experiment for me, as I don't think I've ever tried to sustain something with this tone and perspective before. (I find it mildly disturbing how well most of it is flowing, but that's an issue for therapy, not here . . . or perhaps next year's NaNoWriMo. Hmmmm.)

Stay tuned to this station for next week's report . . .
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